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"There was once an incandescently beautiful fairy named Ella. She lived in a small cottage that was draped in a pink veil of cherry blossoms; submerged inside the velvety green depths of an enchanting forest."
That's the beginning of it obviously. I'm not sure what the title or the plot of it is, but I'm slowly percolating it. I'm kind of placing pieces of it together as I go along. Another part of the story is this:
"The elegant fairy, wrapped in folds of sparkly, white robes, hung over a misty black lake at twilight. She lithely wove herself herself through intricate ribbons of fog."
The words just came to me one day and I thought about turning them into a story. What do you think? The only way to describe it is like mixing different colours of paint together. It has the essence of darkness, tinged with sweetness
I'm 15, I'll be taking a writing class eventually to smooth it out.
Don't use so many flowery words. You're describing every single noun, and after a while that many adjectives get really annoying to read.
"There was once a beautiful fairy named Ella. She lived in a small cottage draped in a veil of cherry blossoms submerged in the velvety depths of an enchanted forest."
"The fairy, wrapped elegantly in a white shimmering robe, hung over the mists of a black lake at twilight. She wove herself through the intricate ribbons of fog."
That's how I would rewrite those passages. Calling a veil of cherry blossoms "pink" is redundant since everyone already knows cherry blossoms are pink. Same with saying "velvety green depths", you can drop the "green" since you're talking about a forest and the green is kind of a given.
You have potential, you're just a young wirter. A writing class would definitely help to hone your skills and give you a better eye for editing.
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